T3+Writing

Thursday 15th September 2011

S.C Recall past events Use personal pronouns Has an introduction Has a conclusion Is written in past tense Has sequenced in order Tell us what, when, why, where introduction personal comments

Introduction Who? Room 30 and room 29 What? outdoor education camp When? Monday 5th September - Friday 9th September Where? Ngamawahine

Day 1: Tramp, cooked own meals, set up rooms, night walk, spotlight. Day 2: Swimming, loop track (bush walk) fire lighting, ABL, art, burma trail, spotlight. Day 3: Activity day 1, spotlight, possum hunting, swimming, bomb fire. Day 4: Activity day 2, SL, camp concert. Day 5:Clean up, eel, clash of the camp, scavenger hunt, HOME.



27.09.2011 WALT:Summarise the main points in an article

S.C. We can use the seven servants (who, what, when, where, which, why, how) to summarise.

New Zealand exacted some payback against its Rugby World Cup nemesis by outclassing France 37-17 on Saturday to qualify for the quarter-finals.

**ONHIGH: SamWhitelock looks for Piri Weepu from the lineout in New Zealand’s game against France on Saturday. The All Blacks won 37-17.** Inspired by captain Richie McCaw in front of a full house at Eden Park, the All Blacks rose to the historic occasion of the great openside flanker becoming the first New Zealander to play 100 tests with a powerful display. The All Blacks ran in five tries to two to earn a measure of revenge for shocking defeats in the 1999 semifinals and 2007 quarter-finals. After containing a strong start by France, the All Blacks scored three spectacular tries in 11 minutes to Adam Thomson, Cory Jane and Israel Dagg to lead 19-0 within 20 minutes. ‘‘We had to absorb a fair bit early on,’’ McCaw said, ‘‘but I was proud of the way the boys kept at it, and when we got our opportunity we put points on the board. In big test matches that’s what you’ve got to do, so very happy.’’ Les Bleus need to beat Tonga in a week to be certain of not missing the playoffs for the first time. Moreover, no team has won the World Cup after a loss in the pool round. ‘‘I have a feeling of great regret, notably about the first half when we conceded three tries in 15 minutes due to gross defensive errors,’’ said France coach Marc Lievremont. ‘‘After starting well, but with no points on board, we let the All Blacks dictate the match. We made schoolboy errors.’’ The All Blacks sewed up the outcome by halftime, when they led 19-3, thanks to a pitiless scrum, sharp lineout, and a fierce defence led by McCaw. The New Zealanders made France miss 13 tackles, some of them too easily. Dagg scored a pair of tries for the second time in two Cup matches, and Sonny Bill Williams added the fifth try. Dan Carter, back after an injury like McCaw, was made five of seven kicks. Midfielder Maxime Mermoz and replacement flyhalf Francois Trinh-Duc consoled France with second-half touchdowns. New Zealand earned the first penalty from a scrum, when French tighthead Luc Ducalcon was popped up by All Blacks loosehead Tony Woodcock. Inside centre Ma’a Nonu shimmied past France captain Thierry Dusautoir and fullback Damien Traille, then Carter flicked to Dagg to put Thomson clear into the left corner. The leftfooted Carter couldn’t convert from the left touchline, but he could from the right sideline to cap Jane’s try. Lock Sam Whitelock panicked the French when he charged down scrumhalf Dimitri Yachvili then Morgan Parra in the same move. Then winger Richard Kahui stopped Traille dead in his tracks, and turned over the ball. That led to a lineout and a brilliant set-piece move. Whitelock cleared ball off the top of a lineout to scrumhalf Piri Weepu, who popped up to Jane. The winger, who was dizzied when Traille fell on him, scooted around the back of the lineout, cut to the sideline, fended off opposite Maxime Medard too easily and was in. Jane was replaced about 20 minutes later. Four minutes after Jane’s try, Carter dummied through the line from 30m out and Dagg was on his inside with another clear run to the line. Just before the break, Yachvili drew a penalty for a cynical dive under a loose arm from Jerome Kaino, and kicked it over from 39m. Halftime was no relief for France. The All Blacks surged from the restart, and Williams, who had replaced Jane just before the break, offloaded to Carter who swept the attack into the France 22. Off ruck ball, Dagg danced inside Lionell Nallet and outside Jean-Baptiste Poux for his second try of the match and New Zealand’s bonus point. Carter converted and added a penalty for 29-3. France got a try when inside centre Mermoz intercepted Carter from 45m out and ran in untouched. Carter added a drop goal, but France replied with Trinh-Duc’s try off a quick-tap penalty. But backup lock Ali Williams caught the restart on the run, and the attack swept to the right to let Williams score in the corner.

Who: New Zealand/France What: New Zealand won 37 - 17 When: Saturday 24th September 2011 Where: Eden park, Auckland How: They scored 37 points to france (17 points) Which: New Zealand Why: Because they are a good team